wow
this is really awesome, great story and great execution
wow
this is really awesome, great story and great execution
hahahaha oh man
take more time in writing, the characters shouldn't vocalize everything they're thinking or explain whats going on. if they have to do that then theres something wrong with the story. the animation was alright though
Actually a lot of that wasn't in the script, it was just added when some people weren't sure what was going on, it's more a way to cover up the lack of skill in animating, especially when I animated things a bit too fast or unclear.
I'm a better writer than an animator and I'm used to writing in novel format where the descriptions and such show the scene. I definitely have a way to go in animating where I will be able to feel more confident in visually explaining things. Til then, oh well.
man
this was one of the most annoying things ive ever watched
well done
i like the general look of everything, the texture etc..
i think theres room for improvement, and some voice acting
nice
nice, but why does it have to be in the portal?
interesting
couldve used a little more work, but overall great job and i like the fact that it came from a dream you had
constructive criticism
work on your timing a bit, do some basic animation exercises and such
thanks, i appreciate a comment that can actually help :D
Great
Haha, this is a great animation. Its short and sweet and its hilarious. Very well done, and I highly enjoyed the nasty ass close up on his leg.
SCHWEEEEEEET
Good flash yo.
battlelore :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
LOL YO MATT U GOTTA BE LIKE OMFMEIOFJJFJF# Hey now that its done, lets go get some eatz and talk about old times!
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
that was great
I am an animator/storyboard artist living in Pasadena CA.
Age 36, Male
Animator
SVA
Pasadena CA
Joined on 2/6/04